5/11/2011


Broken angel

how your tattered black wings

cling to your back

in a failing attempt

to keep you afloat

every hit that you take

every pain that you suffer

shredded smoke feathers

fall to the ground

8 comments:

Jason Shaw said...

me like.

David Allen Waters said...

well done, much imagery springs from the words :)

Adam said...

he looks more like a devil

Irma Vep said...

Oh, on aime le petit filet qui enveloppe l'objet de tous les d├ęsirs.
Irma & Florinda

Nick said...

et une telle belle prise dans le filet;)

becca said...

wow that was just amazingly beautiful.

LORDPATRICK said...

OMG! WOW! I WANT HIM AS MY GUARDIAN ANGEL!

Great poem too!

Hugs,

Patrick

LORDPATRICK said...

I want him for my "Guardian Angel"!